oh god fifty shades of grey is truly as awful as it sounds
this is SO BAD
Oh, please. I can write better porn than this tripe.
Wow. “as he rips through my virginity”
is it weird that the sheer awfulness makes me want more
this is terrible in every conceivable way
this reads like bad guro fanfiction.
It’s worse than I imagined. -shudders- Ugh, I could scrape better writing off the shoe’s of some of my highschool’s freshmen class… Who thought this was a good idea ._. Please tell me that it supposedly being made into a movie and that there are people out their actually vouching for this being something good is a giant JOKE? Please???